Thursday, September 12, 2013
A good man is it actually hard to fine?
I believe this story was very good .My thoughts about it was first why didn't they listen to the grandmother about going to florida .I feel like if they had went some where else that there would of been a differnt ending maybe someone would of drowed in the pool .Also there would of been maybe someone would of got lost.How would they even have a part two if they all are dead ? May be we could try to write a part two and see how everyone would want to decide to see if the grandmother would come back to life or what? This story you could go on and on for days talking about it and how youu felt this was a very good story.
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Danielle,
ReplyDeleteTrue. Everything can have a different ending even if just one small detail changes in real life or in a story. They should have listened to the grandma. Maybe they all still would be alive, or maybe they would all be dead elsewhere. We will never know huh?